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"October 24th"

I can do magic
I'll steal your heart
Pretend it's tragic
And claim no part

She is a succubus
Taking love as pay
One is never enough
Heed the Game she plays

I can feel your fear
Deep and empowering
Reassure me, dear
Our time is souring

She is a succubus
Never let you escape
Not immortal nor one of us
What she does to you is rape

Claim your ignorance
Innocent victim you are
Of course you've innocence
You'd never let her get so far

Be not afraid, an angel sings
You turn to your rescuer
Expecting gossamer wings
But the voice is hers

And suddenly it's clear to you
You've been wrong in many ways
Struggling to suppress what she already knew
It's been your choice to stay

Without your energy,
The succubus wanes
As fading out she
Calls your own name

Reminds you she never lied
You saw what you chose
As you turn to say good-bye
Her blue eyes close

The succubus Morgan's no more
You've no one to blame
As you remember the good parts
Nothing is the same

Good-bye
©2006-2010 ~TranceGemini613
:icontrancegemini613:

Author's Comments

Something I wrote about someone I once loved. The accurate title is "October 24th/The Succubus", but it wouldn't fit up top. This is insanely personal, but it's not obvious. Please be easy on me--I know the meter's a little off.

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:iconinvadercim:
that was nice

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I MOVED TO CIMCITY13 PEEPS 80
this account is just picture stuff:3
:iconhinauchi:
Where did you get that from? The back of a cereal box?

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TRIXS ARE FOR KIDS.

Tch... Your mum is for kids.. :meow:
:icontrancegemini613:
Please do not post comments that aren't questions about the work or critiques on it. This is a poem I wrote about an ex...friend, I guess you could call him.

Who is now trapped in a loveless marriage with someone who, along with him, has not held a job or left the house in months.

Ahhh, schaedenfreude. Lovely. ^^

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I am Emo of Borg; you will be emasculated. Lower your musical tastes and cut up your wrists. Self-respect is futile.
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Ahh! I GOT SPARKLES IN MY EYE!
:iconwhitesnake:
HURR DURR O U SO CLEVAR AND FUNNAY ;LOLOLOLOL

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Hihi
:icontrancegemini613:
I think I love you a little bit. ♥

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I am Emo of Borg; you will be emasculated. Lower your musical tastes and cut up your wrists. Self-respect is futile.
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Ahh! I GOT SPARKLES IN MY EYE!
:icontrancegemini613:
You know, reading this now, I don't feel anything at all.

I'm over him.

I guess I have been for a long time, but I just realized it in a more concrete way.

I'm over him, and it's lovely. :)

(Also, schaedenfreude is taking care of him and Katie like nobody's business, so I'm going to continue with my life in smug self-righteousness. Being better than someone else never felt quite so good.)

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I am Emo of Borg; you will be emasculated. Lower your musical tastes and cut up your wrists. Self-respect is futile.
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Ahh! I GOT SPARKLES IN MY EYE!
:icontrancegemini613:
>.> No one else has commented. NO ONE LOVES MEEEEEE...*goes back to drawing* Soon, soon I shall have MANY NEW PICTURES! P.S. Thanks Adem <3

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I am Emo of Borg; you will be emasculated. Lower your musical tastes and cut up your wrists. Self-respect is futile.
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Ahh! I GOT SPARKLES IN MY EYE!
:icongod-mod-grotesque:
"Be not afraid, an angel sings
You turn to your rescuer
Expecting gossamer wings
But the voice is hers"

that's my favourite part.

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***Rockin' The Casbah For Over 20 Years***

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